Entertainment Original: “The company’s revenue increased by 15% last quarter due to successful marketing campaigns and new product launches. Our team worked tirelessly to achieve this growth, and we are proud of our accomplishments.” Rewritten: “Last quarter, we saw a remarkable 15% increase in our company’s revenue, thanks to our team’s dedication to crafting compelling marketing campaigns and launching exciting new products. It was truly a team effort, and we couldn’t be prouder of what we’ve achieved together.” Mr. SV October 19, 2024 When you’ve been in the editing game for over 30 years, you start to see the power of words in a whole new light. It’s