Entertainment . Original content: “According to a recent study, the average person spends about 4 hours a day on their smartphone. This excessive screen time has been linked to various health issues such as eye strain, neck pain, and disrupted sleep patterns.” Rewritten content: “Imagine this: you wake up in the morning, reach for your smartphone, and before you know it, you’ve spent 4 hours scrolling through social media and checking emails. Sound familiar? Well, you’re not alone. Research shows that many of us are spending more time than ever glued to our screens, and it’s taking a toll on our health. From eye strain to neck pain and even trouble sleeping, our smartphones may be causing more harm than we realize.” Mr. SV October 13, 2024 As an experienced editor with over 30 years in the industry, I understand the importance of creating content that resonates with readers on a personal