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Original:
“According to recent studies, the average American spends over 11 hours a day consuming media through various devices such as smartphones, laptops, and TVs. This excessive screen time has been linked to numerous health issues including eye strain, poor posture, and disrupted sleep patterns.”
Rewritten:
Can you believe that the average American is glued to their screens for more than 11 hours a day? That’s over half of our waking hours spent staring at smartphones, laptops, and TVs. And guess what? All that screen time is wreaking havoc on our bodies. From pesky eye strain to slouching posture and even messed up sleep, our tech addiction is taking a toll on our health. It’s time to give our eyes, backs, and minds a break from the digital overload.